Brian's Travel Tips: Spice

Interesting composition.

For a Haiku; too many lines and not enough syllables.
Marvellous first attempt though, please do keep up the effort!
Here's one for you. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!


I really like spice
Love the burn from end to end
Healthcare here is poor


Stay healthy,
J

Dear Jack,

Next time we'll be sure to send you our entry for editing before we publish live.

:)